Part V Writing(20 points, 30 minutes)
Directions: For this part, you are given 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic of My Favourite Sports. Your composition should be no less than 120 words.
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As we know, sport is an important part of our life.I am interested in sport and I do sports every day.
My favourite sport is swimming. It is a healthy and popular sport . I learned to swim when I was only 5 years old. Although I was a little nervous in the water at first, with the help of my parents and coach, I could swim well after several weeks. Now, I am very good at swimming and I go swimming over three times a week. As far as I am concernned, swimming in the water is cool and exciting. During the summer holidays,I usually go swimming in the sea with my family and we always have a wonderful time.
Swimming makes me healthy and brings me plenty of enjoyment.
试题分析:这是一篇话题作文。要求介绍介绍自己最喜欢的运动,并说明原因以及自己的受益。
【亮点说明】作者有着比较好的语言组织能力,语言简洁,选词精准,句子表达也相对较标准,内容连贯,条理清晰,能熟练使用连接词,如As we know,Although,As far as I am concerned使文章更有整体性,连贯性.